Saturday, September 27, 2014
Passive voice and past perfect tense are two separate concepts and are not related, as a rule.
"I whacked the idiot," Conan said actively.
"The idiot was whacked by me," Conan said passively.
Two
people and a verb, but arranged in two ways. And it changes the flow of
the story. The first sentence focuses on who does the whacking and
Conan gets on with her life (or buries the body, depending on how hard
she whacked). In the second sentence, the whackee is the focus of the
sentence and it sorta happens off in a vague area and tries to avoid
calling much attention to the whacker. (And if Conan whacks someone, she
wants the world to know it.) Active voice is direct and powerful.
Passive voice is, well, passive, and slows the forward motion of a
story. Unless there's a reason, Conan recommends active voice almost all
of the time for your story.
Notice that active or passive voice has nothing to do with the word "had." "Had" can be used in either construct, of course.
"Had"
is used in basically two ways - as a means of showing possession and as
a means of setting off way past from just simple past.
Conan had a
Magic Marker of Doom, but some idiot stole it. (Maybe that's why she
whacked the idiot.) Conan possessed a Magic Marker of Doom, but some
idiot stole it.
Then there is the past perfect tense, which is an
important part of the English language. It is used to set off action
before the current action of the story. Conan leaped the fence to chase
the idiot, just as she had leaped it to get away from the nefarious
Harvard comma.
Conan leaped the fence to chase the idiot, just as she leaped it to get away from the nefarious Harvard comma.
The
first sentence shows that Conan escaped the Harvard comma quite some
time ago, which is what we want. The second implies that both
fence-leapings took place at around the same time and were probably
related.
In a story, you might have a flashback to your hero's
childhood. The usual way of writing this scene would be to use the past
perfect tense for two sentences or so, to establish that it's happening
before the present story time. (Past perfect is the "had done" part
versus the "did" part.) You can then switch to the simple past for the
rest of the scene (the "did" part), and end it with another couple of
sentences in the past perfect tense. This signals the end of the
flashback, and you resume in current story time with the simple past
tense.